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34 Public Reviews Given
35 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Mainly I look at how I relate and connect to the story, as well as the grammatical side. I always try to be completely honest and give both pros and cons to each piece.
I'm good at...
Grammar
Favorite Genres
Children's, Fiction, Erotica, Romance/Love
Least Favorite Genres
Scifi, Horror
Favorite Item Types
Prose, Fiction
Least Favorite Item Types
Free Verse
Public Reviews
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Review of The Tomb  
Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think this is perfect. I don't say that often. The simplicity of it, the broken flow describes this wonderfuly
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Review of The Empty Cradle  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (5.0)
THis is beautiful. I am going through this now and I could never get words like this to come together. This describes very well the thoughts and feelings that are experienced
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Review of Identity Crisis  
Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Please tell me, I want to know. How does this end? How did your parents react? How is your life now that this story has played through your life a bit more? Forgive me if I overstep a linewhen I ask these questions...
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Review of Torn  
Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This poem.. the only words I can find are terribly heartbreaking. I hope this did not happen to you. I wish it would never happen to anyone. I can't imagine what I would do if someone tried to take my baby. I don't want to even try to think what it would be like if I found I couldn't ever have another child after that. If this didn't happen to you, or to someone you knew, you are an amazing writer. Your words capture the feeling perfectly as words can. If this did happen to you, I am sorry... Just so sorry
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Review of For a friend  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your words are very kind. not much helps in those kind of times, but those words do.
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Review of Extremely Tired  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can only wish that it would happen like that more often...
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Review of I prayed before  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is very good! I love it! I have been there in this situation. Just recently actually and this is exactly how I felt. Good Job!
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Review of Bleeding words  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't give 5.0 ratings very often. This poem is amazing! It describes perfectly how a writer work. How the thoughts flow from your head to the page. That when you first start it is almost a desperate feeling to get the words out, but in the end there is a kind of peace. I know that when I finish writing something, especially something really personal or difficult, I get a kind of energy. This piece is wonderful and I can't wait to read more of your work!
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Review of At his sunset  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (3.5)
very nice. this is a nice look on death. it shows the importance of memories and the poetic beauty of trying to find our own way after the loss of someone very close to us. It is just dramatic enough when he slips away. I really like how you compare it to a sunset. good job!
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Review of Vlad's Wife  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (3.5)
This was a good story. I was just about to request a review on one of my own when I saw yours. I just recently learned a lot about Vlad the Impaler from a friend. So, when I saw his name, I couldn't resist. It is definitely unique. The struggle she has between fighting and surrendering is very realistic. The moment she jumps, when she yells 'Death to you Turks!' is very dramatic, and it should be. I really enjoyed your story. You are a wonderful writer. Keep it up!
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Review of On the edge  
Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Wow! It is really great! I think I like it so much because the plot is original. It takes a boy who most people would think was crazy and gets you defending him. You don't want him to die and that there is nothing wrong with the vioces (except the dad of course). I hace also always been a huge fan of that one anonymous person who changes someones life and never even knows it. Great job
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is crazy good! It blows my mind! It is my favorite type of genre. End of the world. Who can survive? Are we smart enough to defeat the challenges of a dark world? It show how truly barbaric humans can be. Rather than combining forces and working together, we fight hurting ourselves and others. Like I said before, this story is crazy good and I can't wait to read more of your work!
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Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
:)! I can't help but smile at this! I know several people that would describe their young years just like this. Very funny. Very interesting. I love it! Please keep writing!
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Review of Shelter  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (4.0)
:) This is beautiful! Very personal. Hiding a love, a need underneath a smile. Praying that while you don't want the world to see, there is a secret hope that he/she will see through it.
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Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good! I love it! It shows the simple feeling of seeing something good, pure, beautiful come out of a hard time.
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Review of The Sound  
Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was pretty good. You could feel the tension and frustration building up as you progressed through the story. The entire time I was trying to figure out what the noise was and how the story would end. I must admit, however, that I was completely surprised by the ending. Keep up the good work!
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Review of Alone with Lana  
Review by Krissi
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is amazing! You have a gift. The tragedy of her rape, the surprise of her father being the bishop, and the sad realization that her birth mother had passed away... It is all so sad. I really like the end when she puts on her mother's necklace and perfume then does her best to be brave.
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Review of Nisilella  
Review by Krissi
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is definitly my favorite short story. It reaches into the mind of the readers presents a exciting story, then leaves them wishing it didn't stop. It blurs the line between reality and fiction. Once I read this story I couldn't get it off my mind. Every time I read this story, it gets even better. I wouldn't change a single thing!
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