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Review of Disorder  
Review by Neal Nova
Rated: E | (3.5)
I wouldnt call it completely original, but props even still. Some thing I'd put on a post it note on my alarm clock or something. Hahaa.
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Review of Temperance  
Review by Neal Nova
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great use of vocabulary, the simple structure kinda threw me off though. Unless this was your intent, and if it is, go for it, try to add a rhyming scheme, and tweak the syllables in each line to make it flow better. Keep it up.
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