This story was a wild ride and a fascinating look into the mind of this character. There was an interesting conflict of feelings reading this as I sympathized and wanted this character to be noticed or make a friend but watching the way he went about it and the consequences provided almost a tragic touch to it. I quite enjoyed it. Well done.
I'm not sure I could really follow this very well. I think I'd be able to decipher the point better if it were restructured a bit. I can tell there's something deep in there trying to get out.
I can relate to his piece very much. I recently went to the neighborhood I grew up and it was a much more somber experience than I anticipated. You've laid out a lot of my same thoughts here.
This was a delightful piece that painted a beautiful picture of events and really got inside the mind of a cat in an original way. I really enjoyed it, well done.
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