I think its a good poem. You definitely have been able to portray the emotions through your words. I may not be an expert at judging but I certainly liked reading through your work.
I liked it. It really brought out the emotions. Also, its true in a way. Hate is definitely a passionate emotion, so perhaps it really isn't the opposite of love.When you hate someone, you still remember that person, think of him, on the other hand it is your indifference towards a person that helps you to completely forget him or her.
Excellently put. I think each one of us does find himself / herself in such a situation at some point of time. At such times its easy to say "forget the past" but very difficult to put the saying into effect. Nicely written.
I think its a good poem. Yes, its true that many times we do forget the real meaning of love and relationship. The simple words used in the poem are good enough to remind one of how love only needs to be felt and not boasted about.
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