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Review of Dear ARBYS  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great flash fiction! Great strong characters. Good comedy plot. Well worth reading and reviewing. Got no more time to add anything else.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good! Keep up good work. I look forward to reading more when I can find time. Subject interested me more than the poetry.


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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Edit Points" 
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great item! Very helpful. *Smile*
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Very good short story. Like the length, characters, and plot. Could be indented and paragraphed better. Spelling and punctuation superb. Keep up good writing.
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Review of Imperfect  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great! I didn't expect such a short story to have such great characterization. I feel like i'm there with the characters. A great start in good writing. Keep it up.
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Review of A Writer's Lament  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Inspirational, though I don't entirely agree. Anyway, seem a good length for subject matter. Spelling and punctuation excellent. good use of italics. It helps to have someone who really knows something about writing to write such a good article. Gives me much to think about.
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Review of My True Valentine  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Not too bad. I'm not usually a fan of poetry, but this is good! Free verse is hard to write good, and anybody that can deserves a high rating.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Good free-verse poem. More like a short story.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good charaterisation. Good grammar, spelling, punctuation. Great effort.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good work. I like the rhyme and rithum. I can't give any tips on how to write better. I like the picture that goes with it. I know very little about Nove Otto. Thanks for explanation of form. Helps reader understand work better. Talented poets are rare these days.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Good! I like parodies. I'm not very musical, but I do like music themed items, and even wrote 1 myself. Keep up the good work!
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfect! I don't believe I've ever read a better poem.
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Review of Journey  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good! I don't usually like poetry, but I like this 1. I can give you any tips, since I don't write poetry.
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Review of The Key  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very good story. The characters are excellent. Characters in a story are more important than the plot. Just the right amount of dialogue. Good ending.
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Review of The Review Mixer  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Every time I read this I learn more. It's informative. I'll give it a higher than normal rating simply because I can see no way of improving this.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Perfecto! Couldn't have written a better chapter myself, and I really thought I could! Keep up the good work. I really liked the new character you added in this chapter. Thanx.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
A good story. Vivid chartacters.
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Review of The Review Mixer  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.0)
This item is very informative, but does not explain everything. I got 150 points for 1 review.
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Review of Rescue Mission  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good! I think it was even better than my own story "Wings Of Mercury B". Keep up the good work
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (4.5)
A really great poll for adults as well as kids.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very informative, perfectly clear, easy to understand.
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Review of Passkeys  
Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great. Now all I need is upgraded membership, and I can use passkeys.
I only need 50,000 Gp's or $5 cash from a story sale and i'll get 'em
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: E | (5.0)
A great essay. Reminds me of my parents marriage. Except that they were older when they met. They, too, were married 11 1/2 years, ending tragically with my father's death in April 1981. They, too, were always happy in their marriage, unlike many other couples. It truly was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.
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Review by Ram Effect
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great characterization!
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