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Review by Daisy
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was very helpful to me. I shall certainly put my URL everywhere I can. Thanks
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Review of Not Sure?  
Review by Daisy
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes good. Think you might have missed m of "the see to eventually just disappear" This sentence is the best ever explination of how a psychopathic person might develop. 'My emotions seem to disappear and I became a monster inside '
Good, but sad. Hope it is not true.
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Review of Dream  
Review by Daisy
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this. It is highlighting the power of the mind, positive thinking etc. I like the two line versus, not seen this before. Makes it easy to read.
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Review of Let's Dance  
Review by Daisy
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Reminds me of the that science Fiction film Independence Day. I liked it.
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Review by Daisy
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
It is quite long, but it shows how found you were of him. However you only give the part of his life that involves you. How old was he, what did he do in his life, his personality, his friends his house. etc. Does not go deep enough into his personality.
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Review of Revenge  
Review by Daisy
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
It would be very funny, if it was not so rude. Thats just me though, I shock easily. Not really into poems, but it tells a neat little story. Sure can understand you would be like this and can sense your wanting to get your own back and you did, if this really happened .
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Review of Christmas Morning  
Review by Daisy
Rated: E | (4.0)
Easy to read and well written. However if this is all there is to the story it is very vey short. Apart from that its great
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