*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/potoftea
Review Requests: OFF
21 Public Reviews Given
21 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of I Miss You  
Review by teagirl
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi apoorva
I cannot comment on grammar as this is my weak area, but the poem flowed well I like the rhyming stanzas. to my this shows the first rage of emotions waiting for the next stage.
2
2
Review of The Final Breath  
Review by teagirl
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello evilroad
I enjoyed your short story, it flowed well. You had a good selection of vocabulary which I loved. keep up thr good work
3
3
Review of Greater Good  
Review by teagirl
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi turretguy
Wow what a story, It kept me riveted to the end, is this the opening chapter of a novel if so I cannot wait to read the rest. The story flowed well and I felt apart of it. It was an interesting point of view to write from the deceased persons perceptive of death especially when they are taken suddenly.
4
4
Review of An Empty Nest  
Review by teagirl
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi 1jerseyboy
I enjoyed reading this very much, yes it is short but very much to the point. It flows well. I can picture it in my mind, at one point it writes like you are the nest. Or is it your own feelings of loss and abandonment? That have spurred you to write this.
5
5
Review of Butterflies Die  
Review by teagirl
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Taylor I have enjoyed reading your short story, I had a sense of being the butterfly. I could mentally picture a butterfly hoping from flower to flower looking unsuccessfully for a a mate before his short time on earth comes to an end. thank you for this
6
6
Review by teagirl
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for this, I have found it useful.
7
7
Review by teagirl
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for this I have found it very useful
7 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/potoftea