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Review by Qual
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is the pivotal line of the poem I feel "What’s he want with me?
Oh no, man, I can’t help you
I’m a loser too you see."

Very nice writing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice. I actually wrote a short poem with a similar title though different purpose. Mine was to merely use wordplay with door attributes and how they are relative to a person. I put those specific words in italics. I enjoyed your poem though, very much so!
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