i thought this was good. it does dip a little into the dark side but not alot. just enough to make you understand that it has the ability to go darker if you let it. good work.
this was very interesting. i'm kind of new on this site so i like reading everyone's work. this does make you think, i thought the title was very fitting. i hope that no one ever really has to experience that kind of pain. you know one day you will but hopefully you can be strong enough to go through it. keep writing.
this was perfect. i feel like i go through "writer's depression" quite often. it takes something drastic in my life or other things to catch my interests to get me to write again. its just nice to see that someone else feels that way and was able to express it in written word. keep writing, this was great.
this was serious. i think it really reaches out to a lot of people who are going through things you can't even imagine but they mask it very well. i thought you executed this perfectly.
i thought this was beautiful. it made me remember exactly how i felt when i fell in love with my best friend. it was describing all feelings possible. keep writing.
i like this. its hard enough as an adult to trust anyone but it starts when you're a teen and you're still trying to figure out who you can place your trust in. this was nice.
this speaks for so many people. its like you never really know who your friends are or who you can trust. the ones you probably trust the most are the ones that talk about you the worst. i liked this poem.
i like how you express that no matter what this person buys or sends that it doesn't amount to anything. you would rather have a moment with this person instead of all the trinkets they keep buying. this was very good.
i love this. i'm about to get married so i think this really speaks to people who are about to go down this road or to ones who have been married for a while now and still have that "spark" for each other. this was good work. keep writing :)
this was beautiful. i am more partial i guess since i'm recently engaged right now to my sweetie. lol. but this was beautiful. truly. you are quite gifted.
this was beautiful. it really makes you understand what its like to have to walk away from someone you love or if they have to walk away from you. i thought you described it very well. keep writing.
wow this is beautiful. i'm a big sap for love stories. so this was great. i've been thinking of writing short stories so i've been looking at a lot of them on this site and so far i love this one the most. keep writing :)
this is definetly a conversation that goes on in so many different versions now. its true because i definetly don't see how anyone can sleep with someone and not feel anything. my girls and i debate on this regularly and i've also had my fiance and his friends in on it. you'd be surprised what your own friends think. i loved this. good work.
wow that is so true because the nice ones do finish last. girls too. but its so often women complain about not having a nice one but go for the first idiot that treats them less than what they are worth. loved it. keep writing.
damn! that is a screwed ending. i like those. because really all those fairy tales were originally dark and over the years they were re-written with a happier ending. but i like this. keep writing :)
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