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Review by Soleil et Lune
Rated: E | (5.0)
I rarely give 5's, but this piece seemed deserving of it. Not only is it heartwarming, it is also deals with the fact that some people may do some bad things, but they are good at heart. I loved how you used the little girl, as a sweet, innocent being, to prove your point. I think that the end was very fitting, and for your hard work, here is 50 GPs. :D I hope to read some more of your writing in the future.

Sincerely,
Soleil et Lune
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Review of Unrelenting Rain  
Review by Soleil et Lune
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow. All I can say is, wow. I really like it, and I realize that it was supposed to be short, but maybe you could elaborate on the first and second paragraphs...? It seems less descriptive than the rest of the short story. Also, you use thge words: 'I would sit' twice, and it seems a little reptitive. Anyways, it was overall a VERY good peice, but I give it a 4.0, as there is room for improvement.
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