Masque of Licentia's (staysick) Reviews

I very rarely give five starts to a poem, though I do enjoy them and write them myself.

This was a very touching piece, and had ALOT of levels to go thru I think.

I love the last two lines, They really bring it together, and have so many meaning to interpret.

I have a Psychological Story Contest I am re-opening. Look for it in a day or two, and please please enter it.

JR

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Review of The Luring

Review by Masque of Licentia

Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

I love reading your poetry, It expresses your points well, and has a certain rhythm for them. This one in particular I enjoy, because it alludes to the death, the dark, and the questioning of completing his goal here. I will continue to read your stuff, thank you again.

JR

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Review of The Dark Cathedral

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

Great poem, and it is dark. Thank you.

JR

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Review of Sunken Hope

Review by Masque of Licentia

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

I do like this piece here, its a little confusing as far as the resulting resolution goes. But, im thinking you may have made it that way on purpose. I think that she has delusions of her past, maybe regret, maybe hope. She knows death is near, and she is accepting of it. Though the end confuses me, is she lying down for her death, when they flood the place? are they even going to flood it? or is she delirious enough and thinks this is all going to happen? Maybe that is the point of the story. Or maybe in WAY off, let me know.

Thanks

JR

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Review of Listen

Review by Masque of Licentia

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

This was a great poem, my interpretation, I can feel the hurt, pain, love, honesty, that comes with beeing young. And beeing young, life moves very quick. But, as you state, in the end you still lived your life, and thus all of the trial and errors, you still won. becuase you experienced it. Thank you.