Great, you have an understanding of the meaning of all the words, and I hope you can apply those words and create a very meaningful story. Those words are well intertwined into most all good stories, Passion and Intensity,, a gripping moment, to keep the reader tied to the pages. Also what you need to develop your story plot and flow.
Desire, your driven desire to apply your passion fro presentation. And intrigue, what will continue to captivate your reader. Keep up the good works, will watch for more of your work
Very Good! Enjoyed working this puzzle. Racked my brain a bit funny how you forget all the little details over time.You expressed it all very well. I believe puzzles like these could grow to be very popular. Keep up the good work, continue on with you writing and presentations.
This is a very well laid out set of instructions for furtherance of any writers works. It is laid out in precise step by step instruction for getting your work rated and reviewed and revised and posted. I also agree that the more people we can get on the site to read and write and join will further all present and add many future writers and
give them all personal satisfaction as they grow in their writing and reviewing skills.
We all sometimes run blind in our own mind. We think we know best, but in viewing "our best" we overlook all the real best things. I don't know if your poem is a true story or not but it speaks of someone who ran into the edge and then realized that the only friend they truely had was the one they kept overlooking. Look to the Lord and just "be you".
I think this to be well written. Excuse me if I touch to deep, but I can feel the pain and suffering and
innermost feeling of you as you wrote this. It deeply presents the pain and suffering of having lost.
It is very well presented and demonstrates the actual
scene. I read your profile. You have the right idea.
Keep it up...
It is always good to see ongoing documentation of things from the past. So many things have been forgotten. You presented facts straight to the point.
Very well documented.
Write more on the Knights of Templar, they seem to have recently come to light via The Davinci Code. I
am especially interested in learning more about their
goals and missions in there era. Great Job!
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