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Review of LOVE IS DIVINE  
Review by Squeakers
Rated: E | (1.0)
I feel like its to short. it doesn't give me much detail and it feels like its just a comment instead of a poem.
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Review by Squeakers
Rated: E | (2.0)
I dont understand it. Whats with the glass bird?
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Review by Squeakers
Rated: E | (3.0)
Confused and mysterious. I like it for some reason. its different.
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Review of 5 Sense Poem  
Review by Squeakers
Rated: E | (3.5)
Amazing. I really like it. Just dont like that you miss speeled "stormy" it sticks out unfortunately. And its missing a title. I wish i knew what the emotion was.
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Review of Penguin Poem  
Review by Squeakers
Rated: E | (4.0)
okay, i loved it. mainly becuase i absolutely love penguins. it was well written very clear and absolutely adorable.
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Review of Restless  
Review by Squeakers
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
grammer. the appostrophes are in the wrong place and that is very distracting to me. i didnt under stand it that well. there are a lot of pretty words but besides that i dont like it that much.
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Review by Squeakers
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
i liked it. it was increbly sweet and romantic. i would like it more if you had included what your love for her is like. metaphors and similes. but over all i thoink it was quite nice. keep up the good work. you have great potential.
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Review by Squeakers
Rated: ASR | (1.5)
change "woods" to "wood". i dont like it much. i don't like the way it is worded. better word structure and better vocabulary and i believe that it would have had a deeper meaning. "frigid" is a nice word. i like the story itself. i just dont like the way it is told.
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