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Review of Yet Again!  
Review by Supernatural
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the over-all theme of this poem. I like how you show how everything in life can just crumble, like an old building. It so hard to accept that sometimes, but it's important to understand that some things aren't permanent. Some people can't accept that, but it's still true.
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Review of The Kiss  
Review by Supernatural
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Yeah, as usual I enjoyed your story. I think you're a pretty talented writer. I liked the men's reaction to the kiss, which was ever-so believable. I would read a story along those lines, but it might be nice to go into the background of them. "Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia. XOXO :P
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Review of Mourning Showers  
Review by Supernatural
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved it, I remember when my grandpa died, I was so sick of everyone telling me that they were sorry, because it wasn't really their fault. I wanted to scream at them to go away. Except for one friend who just tried to make me laugh, and act as if everything was okay. Great story.
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Review of Let Go  
Review by Supernatural
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I thought it was good example of how an abusive relationship can affect someone, and you don't want to leave your old life, but you do, because it's good for you. I thought it was pretty well written but there was a few sentences that I would have rephrased, but that's only personal taste, and nothing actually wrong with how it's written.
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