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Review by topbiscuit
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very creative ending
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Confusing ending
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Review of The Stroll  
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Rated: E | (1.5)
Ending could be better as I did not understand the ending
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Review by topbiscuit
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very creative and very relatable
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Review of memories  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Really good prediction of what a veteran solider might experience after coming home from war.
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Review of Crossdressing  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Really good. Good description without just stating what is actually happened.
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Review of Dear Daddy  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Really good. I believe that this is a tough subject to write about.
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Review by topbiscuit
Rated: E | (3.5)
Overall really good. Good prediction on what someone that this poem describes would think.
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Review of i have ruined me  
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Give more details about what he actually did to her. It feels to vague.
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Review of Selfless Bastard  
Review by topbiscuit
Rated: E | (3.5)
The poem is overall, you just use a few words or phrases that people may not know or understand. I like the imagery you used, especially the neurons firing a million a second. That was my favorite line.
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