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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, that is very well written. The imagery is absolutely beautiful. In the beginning of the poem I can feel the dreariness of the scene that is being depicted. As it goes on when the writer goes to sleep the scene suddenly brightens up and I even got a warmer feeling while reading it. The "suddenly" sounds a little abrupt for being in a paradise where the first couple lines are so peaceful. Just my opinion thought. Overall amazing work, keep it up.


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