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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The rhythm of your poem was a smooth reading experience as I followed your love story. The words you chose guided me through the scene and helped me to know the characters and the plot. It seems there is disappointment at the end but you never know what the future may bring.

Thank you for writing and sharing your love poem story word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote an inspirational poem that I hope many people will read and take to heart. I noticed the rhythm changed but this was not very distracting as I read your words. I very much like the positive message about our abilities to make changes so we can have a better world. I trust God which is what Is keeping me grounded.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a better future with me and WdC members


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
WOW! I could feel the anger and frustration because of this horrible situation through your words. You wrote from your heart. I'm sorry you had this experience and hope everything is much better for you now. While reading your story I could imagine the scene, characters, dialogue, and emotions. There was nothing to distract me.

To help people find what you wrote you could use genres such as personal, experience, dark, drama, educational, relationship, or tragedy which can be found under browse by genre for additional possible genre options.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dramatic experience word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of To Live is Christ  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very, very much for writing these words and reminding me where to look and focus my life. Your words are encouraging and uplifting to my spirit and every fiber of my being. I felt joy and happiness as I read and considered the meanings. Nothing distracted me while taking in every word and concert.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Jesus with me and WdC members.


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Review of Doggy Shoes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
If I could reach out and pet your dog I would. Lucy is a happy dog because of her personality which is wonderful. I can see her easy going ways and joy of living and frolicking on walks. It's wonderful she has shoes to protect her feet and that she likes them. There is nothing in your poem to distract the reader and it makes knowing Lucy and seeing her actions and adventures easy because of your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Lucy with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read about Cameron's adventure seeking a jelly-filled doughnut I wondered if He was going to blow up after drinking many cups of coffee and eating many doughnuts. I also wondered if the coffee was going to spring a leak. I could see Cameron with the jitters and gradually getting angry until he exploded from within because he couldn't find a jelly-filled doughnut.

I was not distracted by anything while reading your story.

The ending is wonderful. It takes the kindness of a child to get adults to realize the true meaning of things. A free doughnut is more than a free sweet treat.

Thank you for writing and sharing your doughnut story word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Old Log  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words that guided me from idea to idea, I could smell the rotting, feel the fragility, see the trunk lying lifeless or so it seemed, and yet hope gripped me. This hope is because I know underneath this dead trunk, through it, and without it there would not be life teaming and thriving. There would not be a renewal of life through death. Nature is a great survivor. I thought of these things because your words brought them to my mind.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about the tree trunk and your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Within Arms Reach  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story it felt like taking a trip through the arts. I could see in my mind creativity frolicking about as ideas became artwork. Emotions raced as this artwork was set out for all to see and admire, but you stood in the shadows unnoticed, yet your light shone. These ideas and images formed as I read your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your creativity and word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Balloon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I watched through your words as you experimented with space flight using figures and a balloon for each one. As they ascended into the unknown with no hope of return there was a sense of loss with the sense of adventure. Your astronaut doll seems to have the greatest chance for survival and the ability to go further into the realms of space than another figure before.

I felt like I went on this adventure with these figures.

Thank you for writing and sharing your space travel word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Today, I Will  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
As the words twirled, swirled, and cavorted about I saw them changing positions until they found their right places within sentences and then the sentences formed paragraphs. The story became a living community of words and I visited there while reading your poetry in motion.

Genres that would fit this artistic poetry might be writing, action/adventure because this is an adventure with words, mystery because writing can be a mystery, thriller because it is thrilling to go wherever the words take you, and personal because writing is a personal experience. There are other possibilities of course.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about words and showing what the imagination creates.


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Review of Wanderer  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could imagine a figure searching down every street, path, and trail looking for love or other treasures related to love. Feeling the pull and gentleness of love guiding the figure forward yet not one to love can be found, however, the world is explored daily and nightly. A broken heart beats with this uearning.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem with me and WdC members

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Review of PTSD  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read through your story at first you show him as the ideal person, but as the story continues he gradually becomes more of his real self until he is completely exposed as a person to be avoided and possibly feared. I could see through your story he uses psychological means to control and manipulate. When I got to the end it was as if something heavy dropped to the ground shattering life.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about things not being as they seam

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Review of Stone  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your words I saw a burning bridge, Gold in her hair, and saw you landing in golden rocks unharmed. Although this can be seen as dark, I felt as if there was hope woven into the story. With hope, survival, and a future ahead it is possible for this story to continue. I was not distracted by issues while reading this poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your adventurous word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Summer Nights  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I heard the thunder and pitter-patter of rain mixed with buckets dumped upon a rooftop. Seeing the flashes of lightning illuminate the sky as I looked out watching the storm. Feeling the coolness glide in as it caressed my skin. Smelling the dampness and tasting the dense air. I know the creatures scampered for cover. Your poem is a movie created with words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your stormy word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of I Won’t Survive  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
At first, it seems a mix of contradictions, but this tug-of-war is more than survival. I know some writers have become lost mentally and not come back from their worlds within and yet others never come near to this challenging situation. This also has happened to some chess maters because they obsess over the details of the game and it overtakes them. I feel like surviving writing and other life challenges are a lot of what you considered as you wrote this poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the challenges of survival with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw your ending coming because of the {10 Ladies} reference. The conversation also gave a clue because the interruptions and offerings were distracting the inspector causing him to eventually want to leave without asking for details. As I read your story the conversation was as if I was eavesdropping and it was realistic. The scene was easy to visualize. Your characters engaged in a way that made the story move forward nicely. There were no distractions and I was completely immersed in the events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about the crows with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Feeling the emotions of your words is like having a heavy weight on me. I could imagine fighting to get out from under. Running on a hamster wheel by repeating the same actions over and over must be a horrible living circumstance. I hope there is a light at the end of the tunnel.

Thirty for something...
I believe you wanted to use another word. Auto correct might have changed this sentence.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I saw the events and felt emotions that people might decide to experience, good or bad. More importantly I felt and saw the focus on life as being a precious gift from God. Considering that things happening in your story I believe that through all these things there should be thanks for life. For example I'm thankful for having dirty dishes because I'm alive to wash them.

Thank you for writing about the challenges of life and sharing your word art about life being a precious gift from God. This is what I get from your poem


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Chuckling after reading this is great because it is uplifting and a fun story. I saw an older person running after the cab and eventually realizing it is safer to let the cab go. Also the younger person or persons caught the cab because they could run faster which was a nice visual. Nothing distracted me from reading and emerging myself into your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art chasing a cab with me and WdC members

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I see two tethered together flying and life springing forth in brilliant colors. As if live had just begin after a long sleep. I could feel the happiness and joy of being able to live a wonderful life. There was nothing to take me out of your easy to read story.

Thank you for writing about life and joy and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Broken Dreams  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw this girl at the grave site and felt her sorrow as she pleaded for answers from her loved ones and hoped for their embrace again. The end of your story is one of hope and possibilities. I'm glad it ended this way because maybe you will write more. It is very good to have hope.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about hope and your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Escape The Keep  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words had me running in the story and then jumping eventually panting to catch my breath. I could hear the storm winds, crashing of the waves, and the walls grinding against each other as they collapsed. Watching those trapped inside dashing to escape their deaths made me want to help them. Fully inside your story I was not distracted and enjoyed reading it from beginning to the ending.

Thank you for writing and sharing your stormy story with me and WdC members


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Your story sounds like a happy ever after fairytale. I got to know the characters through their wishes and dream to be married. The wolves seem to be wonderful creatures. The area and townsfolk according to your story are nice and everyone gets along with each other Your story is easy to read, understand, and there were no distractions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wedding story and word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I got to know your characters well because of the nice conversation they had. It was funny when they talked about how each of them was. In my mind according to your description Danny could have been a little person or an alien. I can relate to shopping hassles.

Thank you for writing about your shopping trip and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Fireflies Rising  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could visualize everyone watching the fireflies and enjoying the night. I like fireflies and could see them flying about polsing their light. Feeling the need for sleep I could imagine everyone heading to a comfy bed. It was easy to read your poem and there were no distractions.

Thank you for writing about the fireflies and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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