A box changed my fate

Part 1 - whispers of destiny


Ryuk was a depressed boy. His life wasn't going very well, he had no friends. His bullies teased him ... Once he confessed to a girl he liked. He thought, "worst she could say is no". But when he confessed, she said "sorry I'm dating yer dad". His jaw dropped, his brain took 1hr to process things. Then he walked into a back lonely alley to take his life; but to his surprise he found a mysterious box lying there. Upon opening the box, he found a cute little cat , he says poor little cat you look lonely just like me after that ryuk starts to walk away the cat starts to follow him he stops and says i cant take you to my home my dad will never allow that he opens his bag and gives the last biscuit he had to cat , cat starts to rub her body with his legs ,the weather was very bad it suddenly started raining ryuk knowing cats hate to get wet he picks the cat and run to his home oupon reaching his home he finds out his dad was not at home his dad left a note saying i had to go for some imp work ill be late to comeback look into the fridge i have kept some fish for you you can have them , ryuk was glad only for while but he can take the cat home he goes into his room and serves half fish to the cat and himself which his dad left he sits on his study table opens his bag and takes out the picture of one of her classmate the one who rejected him , he looks at the picture with love , and starts saying why do people hate me am i that ugly am i that bad...no you r a great guy says the cat sitting on table beside him ,great guy huh wait wait what scared him falls of the chair seeing a cat talk , you can talk ?? how a cat is speaking , cat moving towards him says dont be scared and transforms into a beautiful girl of his age ,ryuk gets shocked , are you a girl cat or what ...i am really confused and scaed at the same time , dont be scared i am catherine , i came here from a world unknow to you humans , a different world ? what r you talking abt says ryuk i was travelling back to my world but due to some fault the portal made me come here , bell rings , i think my dad is back home you you hide somewhere , ryuk rushes to open the door , no dont ryuk dont go says catherine , when ryuk opens the door (thunder sound in bg) scene ends with shocking and scared face of ryuk
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Ryuk was a depressed boy. His life wasn't going very well; he had no friends. His bullies teased him constantly. Once, he confessed to a girl he liked. He thought, "The worst she could say is no." But when he confessed, she said, "Sorry, I'm dating your dad." His jaw dropped, and his brain took an hour to process what had just happened.

Feeling devastated, he walked into a lonely back alley with the intention of ending his life. To his surprise, he found a mysterious box lying there. Upon opening it, he discovered a cute little cat. "Poor little cat, you look lonely just like me," he said. As Ryuk started to walk away, the cat began to follow him. He stopped and said, "I can't take you home; my dad will never allow it." He opened his bag and gave the cat the last biscuit he had. The cat rubbed its body against his legs.

The weather suddenly turned bad, and it started raining. Knowing that cats hate to get wet, Ryuk picked up the cat and ran home. When he arrived, he found a note from his dad saying, "I had to go for some important work. I'll be late coming back. Look in the fridge; I've kept some fish for you." Ryuk was glad, at least for a while, as this meant he could take the cat inside.

He went to his room and served half the fish to the cat and kept the rest for himself. He sat at his study table, opened his bag, and took out a picture of the classmate who had rejected him. He looked at the picture with love and started saying, "Why do people hate me? Am I that ugly? Am I that bad?"

"No, you're a great guy," said the cat, sitting on the table beside him.

"A great guy, huh?" Ryuk exclaimed, startled. "Wait, wait, what?" He fell off his chair in shock. "You can talk? How is a cat speaking?"

The cat moved towards him and said, "Don't be scared," and then transformed into a beautiful girl of his age.

Ryuk was shocked. "Are you a girl or a cat? I'm really confused and scared at the same time."

"Don't be scared. I am Catherine. I came here from a world unknown to you humans."

"A different world? What are you talking about?" Ryuk asked.

"I was traveling back to my world, but due to a fault, the portal brought me here."

The doorbell rang. "I think my dad is back home. You need to hide somewhere," Ryuk said, rushing to open the door.

"No, don't, Ryuk! Don't go!" Catherine warned.

When Ryuk opened the door, a thunderous sound echoed in the background. The scene ended with Ryuk's face frozen in shock and fear.