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Rated: 13+ · Book · Personal · #982524
Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
#702470 added August 9, 2010 at 6:41pm
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"A new galaxy is discovered" AAC = Aaron
Clouds: we want to rain, we want to rain. Ha! ...barely drops.

*Gold*

A new galaxy is discovered

         for Liz

Beyond these cupcakes, buns and pots
back oven's heat and baker's art:
an expanding bloom of polka-dots,
her exploding womb of stars.

© Kåre Enga 2010-07-26 [167.157]

*Quill*

Liz, one of the young ladies at Bernice's Bakery is pregnant and it's noticeable when she wears polka-dots. *Delight* The original thought: "the expanding womb of polka-dots / the exploding xxx of stars" It flowed from there.

Also... working on acrostics again. Aaron is an AAC. He's "angelic, cheerful, with a full mouth of pearly whites..." C= cheerful/cheery but I'm not pleased with the line "Cheery before brick's bas-relief" or "Cheery beyond our bold/base belief." I got beyond the A=angelic as it is too cliché. So... A= alabaster; A= aqua, azure, agate... as in:

*Gold*

Aaron at the bakery

         for Aaron Curtis

Alabaster smiles,
Azure agate guise,
Cheery and courteous (beyond belief).

...no guile.

© Kåre Enga 2010-07-24 [167.151b]

*Reading*

Nothing of note. Gathering thoughts from sand: a squadron of barchans; loess, what is gained from desert's loss; ventifacts (dreikanter), three faced pebbles sandblasted (like anyone we know?).

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