L'aura del Campo

Back turned to me [187]

Back turned to me

I look up, the Moon!
but you hide on the far side
where I can never find you.

Yes, I sing to stars,
but I can't tune out your voice,
or forget your round blue face.

© Copyright 2021 Kåre Enga [178.187] (14.juli.2021)

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Form: Sedoka. Two stanzas (each of which is called a katauta). Each has three lines, with 5,7,7 syllables.

Rhyme Scheme: No! These are unrhymed.

Theme: The stanzas are used to see something from two different perspectives. They are often considered a 'conversation' between two lovers, so that it can be like a question and answer. There can be other themes and imagery involved, but try to let the theme of love shine through somehow.