Jots and Tittles and other Random Things

My try at a Brevee style poem

Tick Tock,
Tick Tock,
So says the clock;
Snap, click,
Drop, flick,
Closing a lock.

Time flies,
Time flies
So much not done;
Trying,
Crying,
Not having fun.

"The Brevee is a six-line stanza constructed with lines of 2, 2, 4, 2, 2, 4 syllables and a rhyme scheme of aabccb, ddeffe;

I saw Jay O'Toole do one on the Newsfeed. I thought I'd give it a shot -