Gervic in Wonderland

[E-3] Pig and Pepper :: Achoo!

E. Pig and Pepper
Achoo!

Pick from your choice of the most simple/basic songs ever written and give it a little more 'spice': “Happy Birthday”, “We Wish You a Merry Christmas”, “Twinkle Twinkle Little Star”, etc. (be mindful of your rating!)

Jack and Jill
with a Hint of Teen Romance

Jack and Jill went up the hill,
To fetch a pail of water.
Jack's heart thumped, a lovestruck thrill,
Jill's smile was getting hotter.

He tripped, she laughed, a playful chase,
The water spilled, a bashful face.
Their hands brushed close, a moment sweet,
Maybe this climb held more than a treat.

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