A Place for My Creations |
Plot: Beginning (Where does your start) ▼ Final Premise: After years of enduring a tumultuous abusive marriage, Kelly finds herself in a desperate struggle for survival when a violent confrontation with her husband ends in his death. Fleeing the scene, she seeks refuge in a small coastal town, hoping to rebuild her life away from the shadows of her past. As Kelly grapples with her guilt and fear of being discovered, she forms an unexpected bond with the town's quirky residents, who have secrets of their own. As she helps them confront their own demons, Kelly must decide whether to conceal her past or confront it head-on, all while a persistent detective begins to piece together the truth behind her brothers death.: Act One - The Begining 1. Opening Image:(1%)Single scene beat 1. Introduce Kelly, who lives in a small country town and is trapped in an abusive marriage and her husband, Jaden. Theme Stated: (5%) Single Scene Beat To be stated in setup. Will come from Martin, her friend, telling her that "she can't run from herself forever." 2. Setup: (1%-10%)Multiple scenes beats 1. Show daily struggles: illustrate her life, highlighting the emotional and physical abuse she endures. 2. Show her getting off work late, goes to Pica-Paus for a drink with friends, brings home KFC 3. House dark, beginning to snow, goes inside and is attacked by Jayden. 4. Catalyst Inciting Incident (10%):1. Show fight- she grabs the knife and stabs Jayden, believes he is dead. Flees back to Pica-Paus for help. 2. Jayden's father, uncle and sister, all law authorities of Lockwood—no going back. 5. Debate:(10%-20%)Multiple scenes beats 1. Introduce Martin, Sheryl-Ray and Dannie 2. Dannie to check house out- finds no body. 3. either in morgue or hospital, Danny thinks 4. Need to get rid of mustang , Dannie and Martin take it and runs it off Sacrifice Cliff into The Yellowstone River. 5. Sheryl-Ray calls Jacko for ss#, ID. DL, birth certificate, moonbump. 6. Jacko finds name in obits. Says it'll take 3 days. (need more) - expand |