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| Vorena Script (chapter 2) Chapter 2: Vorena lives up to her name! Page 20: 3 panels ***************** Panel 1: (wide shot) Caption: Once Vorena and her mother were home, the acquisitive adolescent took her two captives to her bedroom and shut her door. Panel 2: (wide shot) Caption: She took them out of their container and placed them on her desk. She was sitting far enough back in her chair that the captives had a good view of her face. Panel 3: (wide shot) Vorena: “Both of you are now my helpless slave toys, I want to swallow one of you! That would make me feel powerful!” Page 21: 4 panels ***************** Panel 1: (wide shot) Caption: Neil and Curtis looked at each other, then Neil addressed his mighty mistress. Neil: “That wouldn’t be right,” Panel 2: Vorena: “Why not?” Panel 3: Neil: “Because we could get digested. If we stay too long inside your gut, we could die.” Panel 4: (wide shot) Vorena: “What’s wrong with that?” Page 22: 5 panels ***************** Panel 1: Curtis: “He’s saying it’s murder,” Panel 2: Vorena: Why is that so bad?” Panel 3: (wide shot) Vorena: “You’re my property now, I can dispose of you as I please! You’re just a couple of criminals, your lives don’t matter!” Panel 4: Caption: Vorena reached down and grabbed Neil, and lifted him above her open mouth. Panel 5: Caption: Her teeth were immaculate, with no fillings or cavities. Her tongue was clean, because she had brushed her teeth before heading off on the trip her mother had planned earlier. Page 23: 6 panels ***************** Panel 1: Caption: Vorena let go of her tiny captive’s legs, and gravity forced him to drop into the mouth of the beautiful behemoth. Panel 2: Caption: Vorena closed her lips and forced the tiny man to the back of her mouth, and swallowed him. Panel 3: Caption: Neil slid down Vorena’s esophagus and dropped into her stomach. Panel 4: Caption: There was a pocket of air, but he tried to hold his breath as long as possible to conserve oxygen. Panel 5: Caption: He was covered in chyme, and he could smell the ingredients of the pizza his conqueror had consumed earlier that afternoon. Panel 6: Caption: Neil knew that neutrino dissimilators rendered the victim immortal, but wondered how much that applied to him if he was inside of someone’s belly. If her stomach acid was too intense, would his immortality be useless? Page 24: 5 panels ***************** Panel 1: (vertical log shot, 2 rows deep) Caption: Several seconds after swallowing her captive, Vorena lifted her shirt slightly and looked at her abdominal region. Vorena: “I can’t believe it! I finally have a captive in my belly!” [Vorena rubbed her tummy] Panel 2: Caption: Vorena covered her stomach back up with her shirt and put Curtis back in the container. Panel 3: Caption: Vorena went to the living room and told her mother she had swallowed one of the captives. Panel 4: Mrs. Ardent: “We don’t own a neural stimulator, doesn’t your friend Bristol have one?” Panel 5: Vorena: “Yes, Bristol and Brianna both have one!” Page 25: 5 panels ***************** Panel 1: Mrs. Ardent: “Head over there and ask if you can borrow one to vomit up your captive.” Panel 2: Vorena: “Mom, you don’t seem too concerned about my slave toy!” said Vorena, noticing her mother had a casual disregard for the swallowed captive’s safety. Panel 3: (wide shot) Mrs. Ardent: “They’re virtually immortal, Vorena. They can probably survive in your stomach for a long time. Now head over to Bristol’s and have them let you use their neural stimulator to vomit up your captive. I can’t afford to get more captives for you. If you kill one of them, that would be a waste.” Panel 4: Vorena: “Yes, mama,” Panel 5: Caption: Vorena headed out the door and went to her friend’s house. Page 26: 5 panels ***************** Panel 1: Caption: She came to the intercom and Bristol beeped her in. Panel 2: Caption: Once inside the living room, Vorena lifted her shirt slightly, revealing her abdominal region. Panel 3: (wide shot) Vorena: “Two burglars broke into our house, and they got shrunk. We registered them as my property, then I swallowed one of my captives!“My mom sent me over here to borrow your neural stimulator to vomit my slave toy back up.” Panel 4: Caption: Bristol thought this was funny, and laughed as she went and retrieved the first aid kit, and pulled out the neural stimulator. Panel 5: Bristol: “It’s fully charged, just make sure you plug up our bathroom sink so he doesn’t go down the drain.” Page 27: 4 panels ***************** Panel 1: (wide shot) [Vorena and Bristol are inside the bathroom] Bristol: “Somehow, it doesn’t even surprise me that the first thing you did was swallow one of them.” Panel 2: Vorena: “Why not?” Panel 3: Bristol: “With a name like Vorena, it comes with a territory!” Panel 4: (wide shot) Caption: Within a minute, Vorena had used the neural stimulator to vomit up her captive, and she rinsed him off in the sink. Page 28: 4 panels ****************** Panel 1: Bristol: “Do you want to introduce him to my captive?” Panel 2: Vorena: “Sure,” Panel 3: (wide shot) Caption: She followed Bristol into the bedroom and watched as her friend got a container identical to the one Vorena had just purchased, and dumped out her shrunken man. Vorena set her drenched captive down next to him. Panel 4: (wide shot) Caption: Bristol spoke in a firm tone of voice as she slammed her fist down on the table where she had dumped her captive. Bristol: “Slave! Introduce yourself to my friend’s slave toy!” Page 29: 5 panels ****************** Panel 1: Seth: “I’m Seth, I was sold at an auction and now Bristol is my owner,” [The two shrunken men shook hands.] Panel 2: Neil: “I’m Neil, I broke into Vorena’s home recently and got miniaturized. She’s my owner now.” Panel 3: (wide shot) Seth: “So you’re new to this? You’d better get used to being treated like a commodity. People treat their pets better than most people treat shrunken captives. Panel 4: Neil: “Is it really that bad?” Panel 5: Seth: “It’s worse, but you’ll get used to it.” Page 30: 3 panels ****************** Panel 1:(wide shot) Vorena: “think they’ve socialized enough, I’m taking my captive home to dry him off. Thanks for letting me use your neural stimulator.” Panel 2: (wide shot) Bristol: “Vorena, maybe you’d better keep this neural stimulator, you’re gonna need it. My sister has one I can use.” Vorena: “Thanks, Bristol!” Panel 3: (wide shot) Caption: Vorena grabbed Neil and exited Bristol’s bedroom and home, and returned to her own home. Neil wondered what the towering preteen had in store for him when they got home. Page 31: 5 panels ******************* Panel 1: (wide shot) Caption: Vorena showed her mother the neural stimulator her friend Bristol had given her. Panel 2: Mrs. Ardent: “So what are you planning?” Panel 3: Vorena: “I’m going to swallow my captives a thousand times!” Panel 4: Mrs. Ardent: “Then what?” Panel 5: Vorena: “Then I’ll swallow them a thousand more!” The End |
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