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| Nazi girls script Chapter one script********* Nazi Cheerleaders From Dimension Zero Chapter 1 Script Page 1: title page ***************** Page 2: (5 panels) ****************** Panel 1: (wide shot) Caption: It was a sunny June day at Bullet Bay High School, the kind of lazy day that tells you summer is almost here. The kids were in that state of mind that indicated they weren't in the zone for studying any more; all the tests and major projects were over for the year. All that was left was the kind of stuff the teachers reserved for passive learning, the things they didn't have to concentrate too hard on. Panel 2: Caption: During the break after second period a 15-year-old kid named Jerome holding a cinnamon roll and a chocolate milk was in a grassy area, where there weren't too many other kids. He was the first to see them. Panel 3: Caption: They materialized right in front of him, slowly at first, then they began to solidify. Panel 4: Caption: He could still see the chain-link fence on the other side of the campus through their still-transparent bodies a couple of seconds before they were completely solid. Panel 5: Caption: There was no noise; no sound to indicate this was a high-tech teleportation device they were using, like the kind in most science-fiction movies. Page 3: (5 panels) ******************* Panel 1: (wide shot) Caption: When the two girls were solidified and looking around, the boy looked them over. [They were both blondes, with blue eyes, and very beautiful. They were about 15 or 16 years old, and they were both wearing red, black, and white cheerleader uniforms with a black swastika in a white circle on their chests. They both wore red and black pleated mini-skirts, with belts that had a weapon holstered. They both wore black-leather mid-calve boots, and they both had small purses.] Panel 2: Caption: Jerome, feeling brave, walked up and introduced himself, still chewing on his cinnamon roll. Jerome: “Hi! I'm Jerome." Panel 3: Hannah: “Hi, I'm Hannah, and this is my friend Taylor. We're cheerleaders at this high school in Dimension Zero." Panel 4: Jerome: “Dimension Zero? Where's that?" Panel 5: Taylor: “Dimension Zero is the code name for the parallel universe we are from.” Page 4: (5 panels) ******************* Panel 1: (wide shot) Taylor: “Since our universe is the primal reality, we call it Dimension Zero. Your universe is just a branch off of our own universe. Therefore, it is okay for us to do whatever we want to the people of your world, including shrinking them." Panel 2: Jerome: “You can shrink people?" Panel 3: Hannah: Yes, but we only shrink non-white people. What race are you?" Panel 4: Jerome: “I'm half-Mexican, and half-white." Panel 5: Hannah: “Let's shrink him!" Page 5: (5 panels) ******************* Panel 1: Taylor: "No, he’s half-white, so it wouldn't be right!" Panel 2: Hannah: “I still say we should shrink him!" [Hannah said as she pointed her shrink ray-gun at Jerome.] Panel 3: (wide shot) Taylor: “I said no, Hannah! You've got nothing to worry about, Jerome, since you're really cute, and you're half-white, we won't shrink you. Can we go to class with you?" Jerome: “Sure, come with me!" Panel 4: Caption: The two girls followed him to his classroom. Panel 5: Caption: Break was just about over, so once they got to the classroom, some of the kids were already sitting in their seats. Page 6: (6 panels) ******************* Panel 1: Caption: Taylor and Hannah took a couple of empty seats in the back, and Jerome sat next to them. Panel 2: Caption: A blonde-haired girl in front of them looked at the swastikas on their chests. Brandy: “You know, it's not Halloween. Why are you dressed up like Nazis?" Panel 3: Jerome: “They're from a parallel universe where the Nazis won World War Two. On their world, everyone dresses like that." Panel 4: Taylor: “We're also from 20,000 years in the future!" Panel 5: Brandy: If that's true, then prove it! Use some of your technology!" Panel 6: Caption: Taylor pulled out her shrink-ray pistol and aimed it at a black kid two seats over. She zapped him! Page 7: (4 panels) ******************* Panel 1: (wide shot) Caption: In an instant, the black kid was less than an inch tall. He stood up in his chair, trying to figure out his situation. Panel 2: Caption: Hannah and Taylor giggled. Panel 3: Brandy: “Wow, I'm Brandy, it's nice to meet you.” Panel 4: (wide shot) Brandy: “I'm one of the popular girls at this school. You know, I've always agreed with the Nazi philosophy, but I never mentioned it to anyone because it's not politically correct. Can I hang out with you?" Taylor: “I'm Taylor, and this is my friend Hannah. You can hang out with us. We were just getting to know Jerome." Page 8: (6 panels) ****************** Panel 1: Brandy: "Oh, Jerome, he’s one of the cool kids, so it's okay for you guys to hang out with him." Panel 2: Hannah: “He was all by himself when we materialized, I would've pegged him as a loner." Panel 3: Brandy: “What were you doing by yourself at break?" Panel 4: Jerome: "My two best friends got called into the office for pulling a prank on my teacher in second period. I was just hanging out by myself because I usually hang out with them, and they weren't there." Panel 5: Caption: Some of the students were looking at the miniaturized kid. Panel 6: Caption: Taylor walked over and picked him up... Page 9: (6 panels) ******************* Panel 1: Caption: Taylor brought him to Hannah. Panel 2: Brandy: “What're you going to do with him?" Panel 3: Taylor: “He's going to be swallowed, but right now I'm not sure whether me or Hannah will gulp him down.” Panel 4: Shrunken black kid: “You can't eat me! That isn't human! You can't do that to me!" Panel 5: Taylor: “I can do whatever I want to you! And you should consider it a privilege to be swallowed by one of us!" Panel 6: Shrunken black kid: “Why?" Page 10: (3 panels) ******************* Panel 1: (wide shot) Taylor: “Because we're beautiful, and you should strive to appease us! Don't you know how much it will satisfy me to know that you're struggling in the depths of my belly? You should consider it an honor!" Panel 2: (Long vertical panel) Caption: With that, Taylor lifted the boy into her mouth... Panel 3: (Long vertical panel) Caption: After a moment, Taylor swallowed him. Page 11: (5 panels) ******************** Panel 1: Taylor: “You'll get the next one, Hannah!" Panel 2: Caption: The rest of the students piled into the classroom... Panel 3: (wide shot) Caption: The teacher called roll, not realizing that Taylor had swallowed one of the students... Teacher: “Reggie Byers?" Caption: He called the name again, and a few students giggled, because they knew what really happened. The teacher noticed Hannah and Taylor. Panel 4: Teacher: “Can I help you girls?" You're not in my class." Panel 5: [Taylor smiled] Taylor: “We're just visiting for the day. We're here with Jerome." Page 12: (5 panels) ******************* Panel 1: Teacher: "In that case, you're going to have to go get permission from the office to be here." Panel 2: Caption: Taylor raised her shrink ray-gun in the air... Taylor: “This is all the permission I need!" Panel 3: (wide shot) Taylor aimed it at a Mexican girl, and zapped her. She shrunk down to the same size as Reggie. Panel 4: Caption: Taylor aimed again, this time at a Mexican boy... Panel 5: Caption: Then at another black kid. Page 13: (6 panels) ******************** Panel 1: Caption: When it was all over, three more people in total were miniaturized. Panel 2: Caption: The teacher walked over to the Mexican boy, and looked at him. Panel 3: Caption: The boy was shocked at what happened to him. All he could do was stand around and look at everyone in awe. Panel 4: Taylor walked up and grabbed the Mexican boy, and Hannah grabbed the second black boy. Panel 5: Caption: They raised them over their mouths... Taylor: “If you make us leave, these kids get swallowed!" Panel 6: Teacher: “Okay, okay! You two can stay! Can you please un-shrink these kids, please?" Page 14: (6 panels) ******************** Panel 1: Hannah: "We can't remember the combination to the lock on Taylor’s neutrino assimilator function.” Panel 2: Hannah: “As soon as we remember the combination, we can un-shrink them!" Panel 3: Teacher: "Will you please excuse me?" [the teacher walked out the door.] Panel 4: Caption: Hannah got up and went to the front of the classroom. Hannah: "We are from a parallel universe, for those of you who haven't been informed.” Panel 5: Hannah: “Our technology far exceeds your own, so while we're here, you'll live by our rules. Here is a sample of our power." Panel 6: Caption: Hannah aimed her shrink-ray at a desk, and it shrunk down to a size proportionate to the size of the miniaturized students. Page 15: (6 panels) ******************** Panel 1: Caption: While Hannah was busy dealing with the desk, Taylor walked over and collected the miniaturized students. Panel 2: Caption: She opened a plastic jar from her purse, and dropped them in. Then she sealed the jar, put it back in her purse, and sat down. Panel 3: Hannah: “How close are the people of your world to developing neutrino dissimilators?" [Asking Jerome.] Panel 4: Jerome: “Neutrino what?" Panel 5: Taylor: "Neutrino dissimilators, that's what our guns are. Neutrino dissimilation is the theory behind miniaturization." Panel 6: Jerome: "I don't know, we have particle accelerators, but I haven't read anything about shrinking atoms." Page 16: (5 panels) ****************** Panel 1: Taylor: "Then you must be about a hundred years away from developing miniaturization technology!" Panel 2: Caption: The teacher returned without the principal... Teacher: “The principal was on his way. Now I’m asking you again, where and when are you from?” Panel 3: (wide shot) Hannah: "We're from a parallel universe known as Dimension Zero, and we're also from 20,000 years in the future." Panel 4: Taylor: “We go to the counterpart of this high school in our own reality!” Panel 5: Hannah: “We came to your world to spend the day here collecting captives, on our world, there are no more minorities available, because they've all been shrunk and sold to buyers!” To Be Continued |
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