\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
    December    
SMTWTFS
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
29
30
31
Archive RSS
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/books/entry_id/265209-the-weight-of-humanity
Item Icon
Rated: 18+ · Book · Teen · #541409
this is a honest look at my thoughts, keep your mind open
#265209 added November 7, 2003 at 7:21pm
Restrictions: None
the weight of humanity
this is a poem i wrote for english, i would add it to my portfolio but writing.com sucks ass, and they want me to pay for this. yeahhhh right........ so poem. it is a personification poem, the assignment was to write a moral outrage poem. ok...... here goes......


The Weight of Humanity


I feel as if carry the weight of humanity.
I am purgatory, only a step away from the fiery pits of Hell.
The doom within my calls crushes hope,
I reverberate the cries of anguish one hundred times.
I open their eyes to sin.
I can still smell the fear of my passengers,
I can still taste their longing for freedom.

I feel the weight of humanity’s innocence and sins.
Like an angel of death, I propel them towards their demise.
This weight is unbearable; I cringe at every addition.
I was not made to bare this burden,
I do not want to be this angel of death.



ok i am open to comments, later.....

© Copyright 2003 Marie Jane (UN: snow_white13 at Writing.Com). All rights reserved.
Marie Jane has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/books/entry_id/265209-the-weight-of-humanity