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AMSTERDAM TO FRANCE [An unusual poem of mine, which just happened, never, maybe, to recur] I met her in Amsterdam, Then I took her to France. There in a cosy bar we Had a sensuous dance. We danced and drank till midnight, When it was time to go. But where to go we knew not; So we just had a blow. Oh, what a blow job was it! It blew me off my head. But now her own desire was Truly inflamed in stead. My purse was almost empty; Hotel I could not hire. We found a bench in the park. There we let out our fire. * Written in abcb 7-6-7-6 format * EXPLANATORY NOTE: All my writings are devoid of sexual content. Then, why this exception? It calls for explanation. As a matter of fact, it is writing.com which is to be blamed:) First, it made a poet out of me. Then, it taught me much about rhyme and meter. Also, it gave me a free upgrade for 3 months. I made Ithe best of that opportunity and filled up the permissible quota of items. Then, I started buying 3- monthly upgrades, till it started the auto-reward system. I thought: if I can’t publish my poems and earn a living from writing, let my writing at least pay for my upgrade. So I started collecting GP by reviewing items. And, while doing so, I happen to review "Invalid Item" , which contains the sentence: “See, we met in Amsterdam”. So far, so good. But as I read the prose story, my poetic antennae, grafted in my head by writing.com, told me that “I met her in Amsterdam” would make a great opening line for a 7-6-7-6 rhymed poem! S So, I wrote a poem opening with that line, keeping the content patterned on that of the story I was reviewing. Am I to blame? M C Gupta 16 September 2005 |