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Once again I did not get to the computer until late but here is what I have accomplished... "Invalid Item" Review To: ~Wistful Rune~ (117) manga_kate Moderator Offline or Private Last On: Private Anonymously?: No! Public/Private: Private Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 9:19am Rating: 4.5 Content Length: 730 Characters Review Follows: First Impression Sounds liek the beginning of something great! I want to know more... Spelling and Grammar I see no errors in spelling or grammar. Organization and Readability Well organized to fit the topic and it is an easy read. Suggestions The only suggestion I have is to send me an e-mail when you turn this into a book. Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader This review is being dome to comply with a task in the "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT" "Author's Spotlight Tasks" Review To: Ben Langhinrichs (31) blanghinrichs Preferred Author Offline or Private Last On: Today Anonymously?: No! Public/Private: Private Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 9:26am Rating: 5.0 Content Length: 717 Characters Review Follows: First Impression Great story! I sometimes feel liek Sherpie myself! I am reminded of my favorite country song "You're Gonna Miss This." Spelling and Grammar I see no errors in spelling or grammar. Organization and Readability Great chronological organization and an easy read. Suggestions There are no suggestions that I can think of. Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader This review is done to complete a task in the "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT" "Invalid Item" Review To: Mysty Rayn (1) mystyrayn Registered Author Offline or Private Last On: Yesterday Anonymously?: No! Public/Private: Private Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 11:32pm Rating: 4.0 Content Length: 1,004 Characters Review Follows: First Impression I like the idea behind this one. Something we all go through at one time or another. Form I like the use of free verse and the repetition. Spelling and Grammar I see no errors in spelling or grammar. Flow and readability The piece flows good and is a short and easy read. Suggestions I like the idea behind this oneand I think you could add more llines without taking away that idea. It is short but I feel like it needs to be filled out more. Maybe you could show the jumbeld words?Anyway, I think you have something here. Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader. This reveiw is being done to comply with requirements in the "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT" "Words vs. Actions" Review To: strlcuckoo (1) 1jerseyboy Registered Author Offline or Private Last On: Today Anonymously?: No! Public/Private: Private Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 11:38pm Rating: 4.5 Content Length: 825 Characters Review Follows: First Impression I like this. I think my favorite thing about it is the rhythm and the way the rhyme does not seem forced. Form I see no set form but I like the abcb rhyme scheme. Spelling and Grammar I see nor errors in spelling or grammar. Flow and readability This piece has a very nice flow and is a very easy read. Suggestions There are no suggestions that I can think of. Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader. This review is done to complete a task in the "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT" "Invalid Item" Review To: Susanna Kington (2) ellesmama Registered Author Offline or Private Last On: Today Anonymously?: No! Public/Private: Private Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 11:46pm Rating: 4.5 Content Length: 777 Characters Review Follows: First Impression I was hooked fromthe beginning. I liked this although I think I was expecting something a little different in the end. I don't know why... Spelling and Grammar I see no errors in spelling or grammar. Organization and Readability I like the organization and the humor adds a nice transition to the past. It is an easy read. Suggestions There are no suggestions that I can think of. Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader This review is done to complete a task for "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT" |