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#802145 added January 5, 2014 at 6:53am
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Reworked an older story
I've reworked She Talks to Angels and placed it in one of my works in progress journals (The original is still untouched at this time.)

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I am interested in hearing if the extra 114 words is an improvement to telling the story.
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