Amygdalia's Blog

Editing

I just finished red penning "Sir Georgie and the Dragon"  [ASR] ! I’m fairly proud of myself, as it took me several months to even pick up "Nell's Journey"  [13+] and get started, last year.

Not too bad . . . I’m afraid parts of it may be a bit too preachy, and I’ll need some feedback on that before I get deep into editing. There’s also a storyline that needs to be added . . . assuming I can figure out what it is. I just need something to help Alex prove himself, without relying on his friends to prove his right to rule as king. I can DO this! There’s quite a bit in the story that I like, and I cried more than once while reading through it.

On the other hand, there were a handful of things that just did not make sense. I just wonder . . . what was I meaning to write, when I said “upswing fists”??? *shrugs* The world may never know.

So I’m excited! I’ve written an entire trilogy, and the threads that run from beginning to end make sense. I’ve completed the story, and just need to tie up some loose ends.