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Wednesday Poems

‘Idál (Justice), 9 Núr (Light) 175 B.E. - Wednesday, June 13, 2018

"Fire and paradise both bow down and prostrate themselves before God. That which is worthy of His Essence is to worship Him for His sake, without fear of fire, or hope of paradise."

The Bab

Worship God each day
giving praise and gratitude
for God's sake alone.

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My mind walked off today,
it took a jaunt
around the neighborhood,
and across the world
looking for inspiration.

It found my muse
watching lava descend
into the Pacific Ocean.
© Neva F. Darbe
June 13, 2018

Poetry Critique1

Intertwined
among the wander lines
of interrupted reality

Allusions
indicating a bard's
perspective

Footnotes
1  Posted on Poet 999 - Butterfly Emerges from Her Cocoon.