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Rated: 13+ · Book · Personal · #982524
Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
#940656 added September 17, 2018 at 2:00pm
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#6 Tataki/sashimi/ktanka
24 here and many more I need to put on line... way over 150 in this blog so far.

Any comments really help me choose which ones to look at again and maybe put in a book.

261 146a snow melts / in a rush to greet the sea — / ducks worry the eddies
262 146b sunshine on green / hills — willows bend / to the flood
263 146c voices in the / stairwell — sun on the willow / drowning in the flood
264 146d flag limp — too / tired to wave after / last night's storm
265 146e evening's cloud / part — sun enters / the northside windows
266 146f plants in the northside / window ledge only know sunrise / and sunset ... in the summer (far too long = what to cut or restate)
267 146g sunlit swatch of / green — a dark path / rising to the peaks

268 143a birds flit / in trees — bugs / biting me (as bugs bit me)
269 143b an acrid smell — / a picnic under / the pines
270 143c a field of gold — / dandelions before the / mower's blade
271 143d raspberry leaves soft / to the touch — before / the thorns of summer
272 143e a late cold / snap! — no peaches / come summer

273 142a a maple blossom / time — sneeze now — sneeze / later — syrup on pancakes (long)
274 142b the river rushes / by — the old man snoozes / on a bench
275 142c does the crow / notice the dandelions / rioting? (in bloom)
276 142d a warble / from a bush pierces / the river's roar
277 142e a whoosh of water / around logs — a green / head bobbing

278 139a wake-me-up- / cup — brown caffeinated / bean juice
279 139b a nasturtium crawls / up the window — a bug / scurries away
280 139c a stack of / plates — silence / of the clutter
281 139d the pathos / reaches out — who / will be untouched ? (remain untouched)
282 139e clouds promise / thunder — not one / drop of rain
283 139f hard iron table — / more comfortable / than my thoughts
284 139g the daffodils / yellow beacons (lanterns) — even on / this dark night

139 5.may.2018
142 6.may.2018
146 7.may.2018
143 6.may.2018

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