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#21 haiku-ish tataki sashimi ktanka

tataki = haikuish with place
sashimi = haikuish but not a definite place
ktanka = like a tanka
*FF = foto / photo

I wouldn't mind if anyone reading these would comment which ones they like.

702 A stew of meat, / potatoes, carrots — two cooks in / white cloaks squabble [134a]
703 The road under / water — sunshine greets the / lone lilac [134b]
704 No wind greets / the river — slowly settling (sinking0 / into its banks [134c]
705 Logs ride / the river — in one direction / only [134d]
706 The sound of / the waves — Do not distract / the surfer! [134e]
707 My thoughts. / Too dangerous to / write them down. [134f]
708 Lost watching / clouds — the statue bears offerings: / flowers, fruit, snow [134g]

709 In digging the / garden — an unharvested / potato [136a]
710 The river cuts / a new channel — reveals a / forgotten wall [136b]
711 The sudden / downpour — washes away the grime / of snow melt [136c]
712 One hundred year / old room — if I die here I won't / be the first [136d]
713 A new nest / must be built — first remove / last year's bedding [136e]
714 Evening echoes / the dawn — pinks the mountains / other face [136f]
715 I follow / the moon beyond the lanterns / of my kind [136g]

716 Thunder! / Rose petals fall on a / stiffening fledgling [138a]
717 Swallows / swirl — the river rages / below [138b]
718 A robin tugs / at a worm — a young / friend groans [138c]
719 Art hung on / walls — a drop of wine / on her lips [138d]
720 Fifth month fifth / day — green covers / old graves [138e]


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