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Clover Middle School Teachers' Lounge

Clover Middle School Teachers' Lounge

You chew;
they moo.

Then laughing, fling food AT you. Rude!
they need to change their attitude.

If not...
you'll sue.

K.E. 22.february.2020

2/2 8/8 2/2
Stanza/line breaks and punctuation slow the reader down and emphasize certain words.
Overall rhyme a/a b/b x/a.
Internal rhymes by syllable:

aa
xa
xxbbcdac
xxaxxdxc
xx
xa

An iambic rhythm is possible when reading out-loud, especially the second time.
Assonance brought to you by "oo": chew/moo/food/you/rude/to/attitude/you'll/sue.
"At you. Rude!" mirrors "attitude".
Title provides place and a bit of irony.
24 syllable prompt: attitude. After writing I realized prompt was "attributes" not "attitude" Oh, well!

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