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Rated: 13+ · Book · Personal · #982524
Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
#990979 added August 17, 2020 at 9:04pm
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In the year 2010 [190b] Chores [190a] 24σ
In the year 2010

We gazed into crystal balls;
dazzled by what was shown in limpid pools,
why didn't we see our fall?

24σ: 7/10/7 a(a)a (a) = near rhyme

© Kåre Enga [177.190b] (16.avgust.2020)

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Note: I confused limpid (bright, clear) with limp (in the sense 'worn-out') and wrote the following in a flash before I realized my misuse of limpid and put limping instead. I wrote the above in response to this so I leave it here to amuse myself:

Chores

Mopping these floors with ragged cheer,
limping through August's dusty heat,
as worn out as this endless year.

© Kåre Enga [177.190a] (16.avgust.2020)

24σ: 8/8/8 axa

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