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Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/books/item_id/1501776-O-Pinions/day/4-5-2024
Rated: XGC · Book · Opinion · #1501776
May my opinions gather wind under their wings and fly, perchance to soar.
O PINIONS!

These are my opinions. The good, the very bad, the really really ugly.

Pinions are the flight feathers of birds. Without them they remain as grounded as we do. With them they soar.

As "Joy gives us wings" so anger and irrational feelings and thoughts ground us too. It is my hope that not all of my opinions are negative, that some may gain flight (or at least flop around. *Rolleyes*)

Knees of the trees, a fountain, a rainbow, Muscogee, OK in 2004.

During the Azalea Fest the larch's knees approach the fronds.
The fountain's on and soft green feathers brush the surface.
In the mirror of the pond see by what I choose to share
(there... by the golden knees of old larch trees)
what lies beneath my surface.

Haiku rant
April 5, 2024 at 1:36am
A response to : 1) Does the syllable follow in English? If not, what does? As you know... Japanese does not count syllables, nor is it a metered language like Norwegian. Syllables are too 'heavy' in English. Spanish, however, is much better as it's a 5 vowel language like Japanese and cvc syllables can be avoided. Too many cccvcc words in English. 'stretch' comes to mind. 2) Does the last line have to relate to nature or the natural world? Westerners do not ... [Read more]


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