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When I write.

by Xiea

Rated: E · Book · Other · #2235418

So when I write, I'll write.

For the rare times when I write.

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10 Most Recent Blog Comments:

deemac

Jan 21, 2021 at 7:06am
In response to "2021"

Nice original little piece, kinda reflects the way I feel too.

Xiea

Jan 14, 2021 at 6:50pm
In response to "The whispering puppeteer"

Thank you Seabreeze

Xiea

Jan 13, 2021 at 5:57pm
In response to "It'll be okay"

Thank you for stopping by! Glad you liked it 😊

StephBee

Jan 6, 2021 at 12:15pm
In response to "Holiday letter"

Thanks for your entry in the Bard's Hall Contest. Word Count was listed in accordance with the rules.

I thought the opening was engaging and the salutation addressed a reader. The letter takes a look at the author's life, where it was going and how it COVID had influenced change. The letters ends on an upbeat note.

Kåre เลียม Enga

Dec 30, 2020 at 4:39pm
In response to "Sacrificing"

I wonder whether you were thinking of Nashville.

Please edit if entering in a contest. There are a few typos that need to be fixed.

If you can get out tonight and the skies are clear look up.

Kåre เลียม Enga

Dec 30, 2020 at 4:34pm
In response to "Mrs. Clause's curse"

Reminds me of the "Dark Dreamscape" contest. It fits the prompt *wow*

I went to provide a link but saw that you've already entered it! I'm thrilled.

Seabreeze

Dec 9, 2020 at 7:18pm
In response to "The whispering puppeteer"

Wow. Cool story...hope you plan more. I normally don't go in for sci-fi, but this story is intreging..holding my attention. From your blog, I will be visiting your pages. Thanks, Seabreeze

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Madwriter

Dec 1, 2020 at 8:06pm
In response to "Ally's prophecy"

I like the narrative your making here? I don't know if you did more with this or if this was just a one off but I love this so much. If you did do more with this please email me at this sight or send me a link? If not I would still like to know more about you writing style.

Madwriter

Dec 1, 2020 at 7:57pm
In response to "An adventure to remember"

This was vary fun short story, I had no idea what was going to happen next but I found it quite funny. I was a bit surprised at the end, but looking back I could see how all that would make sense.

Madwriter

Dec 1, 2020 at 7:50pm
In response to "It'll be okay"

I love this, thank you so much for sharing.

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January 14, 2021 at 7:20pm

#1002116

Salty departure

breathless empty perfume visions torment solitude wearied linger

Breathless, I stand before him,
Allowing my perfume to linger,
I move slowly and carelessly,
Knowing the torment it causes him.
I look at him with an empty gaze,
That will cause him visions of our times together,
Wearied but still hoping,
He'll keep waiting on the other side of the glass in solitude.
Forever and ever and ever...

Breathless, I stand before him,
Perfume lingering,
moving carelessly,
Knowing his torment.
My empty gaze set on his,
Visions of our times together,
Wearied but hoping,
Waiting on the other side of the glass in solitude.
Forever and ever and ever...

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January 14, 2021 at 6:38pm

#1002112

Light

With no real stability, I'd wander around
Through the corridor of life, like under a command,
Never stopped to think why I was doing something.
Everything seems vain and meaningless until that day,
When miraculously, I stopped to think,
Where do I belong? When did I begin?
Is there an end? Will I just be another life as I leave?
Stuck in a cycle with no true goal?

Thats when I began to look for a way out,
For something that will tell me that my struggle is worth something.
I began a journey towards God
And suddenly, the entire world gained became colored.
Flowers began to bloom, and I began to notice,
The sun began to rise, showering me with kisses,
I began to see a light in the end of a dark tunnel,
And I found the within myself the motivation to reach it.

LC:15
Finding lord was truly a gift for me and I do wish I learn to acknowledge his Grace more.

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January 14, 2021 at 6:21pm

#1002111

Move

Turing over a leaf as I leave behind,
The memories of my past weeks and months,
I still haven't really realised,
If the previous March has begun or ended.
Time has been cheating itself for so long now.
I've lost all track of where I really am.
Along with the motivation to keep on moving,
Hoping that someday it'll hit, and I'll be able to move on.

LC:8

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