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a day ago
In response to "A Moment In Time"

I bet you will do well with the cleave! After you mentioned it a while back, I went searching and found two failures in my port (set to private) written long ago. Might have to revive and rewrite. Or not ... haha haha

Apr 26, 2025 at 11:56am
In response to "A Moment In Time"

ßlυҽყҽʐ 🤍 - I'm having fun working my way through her mini-encyclopedia of forms. And one day I will have a go at the cleave!

Apr 26, 2025 at 9:40am
In response to "A Moment In Time"

After reading your poem and then Bianca's poem, I was impressed how well the mirror effect works on both pieces for making sense. Well done.

Apr 16, 2025 at 10:27am
In response to "Waiting"

Hey... that's something to try! Thanks

Apr 16, 2025 at 9:25am
In response to "Waiting"

ßlυҽყҽʐ 🤍 - Once I'd picked a form to play with, I started with the ending and then had to sweat to try to back-fill it. I went through quite a few candidate "repeat" words before settling on this set!

Apr 16, 2025 at 9:19am
In response to "Waiting"

Nice job with the form and wild card! Still working on one myself. I keep ending up with resolution!

Apr 16, 2025 at 8:40am
In response to "Waiting"

Amethyst Angel 💐

- Dark is one genre I seem to do ok with. Nonsense is another. It's all the rest that cause me problems...

Amethyst Angel 💐

Apr 16, 2025 at 7:46am
In response to "Waiting"

Good work here. I find it hard to write dark poetry without being either entirely overblown or feeling like I'm just glueing together randomly gloomy words.

Apr 12, 2025 at 11:23am
In response to "Scratch, Scratch, Scratch Your Head (a round for 4 voices)"

: I forgot about them - it might have thinned the herd down a bit, especially with the last few lines.

Apr 12, 2025 at 8:52am
In response to "Scratch, Scratch, Scratch Your Head (a round for 4 voices)"

That's crazy! I use 'indents' when a lot of blank space is needed. Cuts down the ML, but it can still get confusing when it comes to editing.