Your entertaining poem, the subject, incorporating great rhyme, rhythm, and repetition, brought to mind a kids' song. When my kids were in preschool, a children's singer, Joe Skruggs, visited their little school. After his show, my kids wanted a cassette tape of his songs, so I agreed. After that, everywhere we went in the car, Joe Skruggs serenaded us. This one,https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MA8jD2jxS2g, was a family favorite, although frankly, I enjoyed most of his stuff. I mean, I hardly had a chance to keep those songs out of my head. Really, my kids (now adults) and I have fond memories of "The Parade"!
I bet you will do well with the cleave! After you mentioned it a while back, I went searching and found two failures in my port (set to private) written long ago. Might have to revive and rewrite. Or not ... haha haha
ßlυҽყҽʐ - Once I'd picked a form to play with, I started with the ending and then had to sweat to try to back-fill it. I went through quite a few candidate "repeat" words before settling on this set!
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