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Is Vogue worth the lifestyle?

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philosophical satire?

Papi's Standoff

The T800 on T800 fight would have gone differently I think.

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The Golden Coin

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Four Lads Stacked In A Trench Coat

by Fivesixer

Rated: GC · Book · Personal · #2341182

Poetry inspired by The Beatles for The Beatles Musical Extravaganza.

Celebrating the magic of The Beatles. These entries are poems for "The Beatles Musical Extravaganza"

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10 Most Recent Blog Comments:

Fivesixer

Jun 28, 2025 at 3:06pm
In response to "Every Now And Then"

Thanks Jenny!!

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Jellyfish

Jun 28, 2025 at 2:53pm
In response to "Every Now And Then"

I wasn't sure what KINTSUGI was so I looked it up, actually I have heard of the concept but I did not know that was the word. A good analogy to use in your poem

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Jellyfish

Jun 24, 2025 at 2:59pm
In response to "She's Leaving Behind"

I actually did not guess she was going to another state to get an abortion, but now you have said that I get it!

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Fivesixer

Jun 23, 2025 at 9:04pm
In response to "Get Back! (For Jojo And Loretta)"

Thanks Bri!! The Jojo here is made up, but there's definitely a Loretta in my apartment building I used as partial inspiration.

Brigitte

Jun 23, 2025 at 8:59pm
In response to "Get Back! (For Jojo And Loretta)"

Love this. We all know a JoJo.To our own luck. Grateful for this enchanting poem

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Fivesixer

Jun 23, 2025 at 4:57pm
In response to "She's Leaving Behind"

Thanks so much for the kind words, Jenny! Yeah, it's set in the American south, where states are trying to ban abortions and make it a crime to travel to another state to get one. This activity has been a lot of fun.

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Jellyfish

Jun 23, 2025 at 4:22pm
In response to "She's Leaving Behind"

I love this Version of "She's leaving Home" - When I was a kid my Mum used to play the Sgt Pepper album and I loved this one, I like the way you have set it in America (Greyhound?) To make it a bit different. It tells a story and flows well. You have written some great poems for this competition!

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Fivesixer

Jun 17, 2025 at 7:49pm
In response to "So Tired"

Thank you for catching the "old woke" reference!! And I am also aware of these remedies of which you speak

. Thanks for takin' a peek!

Brigitte

Jun 17, 2025 at 7:46pm
In response to "So Tired"

Well, I know a herbal remedy or two...or some physical activity
that might do, might do.
Hugs and chin up.
We of the great order of wokeness will win in the end.
Just ait, around the bend,
even those Repubs bubs will see
throught the orange hate and glee

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Fivesixer

Jun 17, 2025 at 7:44pm
In response to "Rigby"

Thanks Bri...caught a few people off guard on Twitter.

June 26, 2025 at 1:07pm

#1092277

Yours Mine Yours

You share like a toddler;
as in, you don't.
It's impossible to be a whole
when one half refuses
to play nice and
do their part.
If that's your way
of saying you're
frightened of me leaving,
you're weaving a fictitious fable
in your arrogantly
troubled mind. All day,
it's what I hear when you
feign affection.
Everyone sees through it.
Your kisses stain
more bitter than the wine
you spilled on me when
I last tried to say goodbye.
I'm no longer willing
to call your bluff. I'm
taking what's mine
and rebuilding my ego
without the aid of your
far-sighted petulance.
I should've done so years ago.

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