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What differences do you see between the original email sent in the year 2000 about the "miracle" and the published accounting as written in 2021 of Willy's Accident? In the email I was writing to family and friends who already knew of the "dream" with my mom, I had to add background information and introduce the "gift" that the main character Willy has before the telling of the "miracle" story. It was in 2015 that I actually recalled the prayer to "give me one more chance". I felt it would be a disruption of the story to put in the actual time rather than it occurring just after sending the email out. What are your thoughts? Who do you think is my target audience with writing Willy's Accident? What drew you to make the target audience decision? |
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