I took a look at your port and I'm genuinely curious where you're at on your writing journey. My first suggestion would be to put more time and care into the presentation of your writing. The title of your first chapter title lacks proper capitalization. It also lacks a gripping hook. These are the first things potential readers see when they come across your work. You've got to put your best foot forward; if you present your work in a way that doesn't show care and attention to detail (like basic grammar) then most folks will skip it because they'll assume your actual writing will be the same way. And we don't want that! We want people to reader your tales and the wonderful worlds you create
I'm also asking because even your username "mybooksucks123" seems to lack a seriousness or confidence in your craft. I'd suggest joining a group here on site to fine-tune your writing and gain confidence through mutual reviewing
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