(This message was edited by milain on 04-23-05 @ 5:29 pm EDT)
This is by far my worst poem yet. Please someone bury it!
At risk of being myself redundant,
I use the phrase here abundant,
I must protest with my whole heart
Emily's defamation that you start.
For is not poetry all about feeling?
And must that pleasure you be stealing?
Light and sweet poetry is useful, true.
But obviously not for either of you!
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