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by Agnie
Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing · #956661
Are there any rhymes you hate? What are they??? Tell me! Let's laugh! :)))
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Apr 23, 2005 at 6:45pm
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Re: Re: Too saccarine
by Agnie
*Bigsmile* OK, here’s a horrrrrible poem from me then! *Bigsmile*

I do like many of Emily’s poems! Sí, sí!

But there are some rhymes that just bother me
That are far too common in some poetry.

*Confused* Night-bright *Confused* – let’s take this one for a start:
Nonsense! The day’s bright *Cool*, the night’s rather dark! *Star* *Star* *Yawn*
*Worry* Love-above *Worry* – another rhyme I don’t like to see:
With one above the other, where’s equality? *Shock*
*Sick* Together-forever *Sick* – this one I just hate! *Angry* *Angry*
The meaning is nice, but the words sound so fake. *Pthb*

With few exceptions, these rhymes hurt the eye,
Don’t use them, people, let them rot and die!!! *Laugh*
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