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Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing · #956661
Are there any rhymes you hate? What are they??? Tell me! Let's laugh! :)))
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May 1, 2005 at 10:32pm
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I can beat that!!
by A Non-Existent User
Please enjoy hating this truly, truly hideous poem I wrote and then NEVER speak of it again :)

Death of a Heart

A broken heart all alone
just trying to survive

"Please love me" it said
"for a heart unloved
ceases to exist"

but no one came
no one cared
and the heart's cries
became a whisper

"Please hlep me"
it pleaded
don't ignore me"
but its pleas were to quiet to hear
and the others walked on by

Its energy waning
the heart uttered its final words

"I wanted only to be loved"

A broken heart all alone
just trying to survive
Lay down its head
and beat . . . and beat . . .
and died.


(kind of like I wish this poem would!)
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I can beat that!! · 05-01-05 10:32pm
by A Non-Existent User
Re: I can beat that!! · 05-02-05 8:34am
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Re: Re: I can beat that!! · 05-02-05 1:41pm
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Re: Re: Re: I can beat that!! · 12-13-05 8:21pm
by Holly Jahangiri Author IconMail Icon

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