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May 17, 2005 at 1:51am
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Some Feedback?
I just wrote a short story the other day, and I am trying to sell it right now. It doesn't seem anyone on Writing.com wants to say anything about the piece. It's been viewed, just not commented on.

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It's not completely erotica, meaning it takes just a tad bit of time to get to the good parts. LOL! It's romance/erotica/homoerotic. Any comments and help on the piece would be appreciated. Thanks!

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All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
- The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring


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Some Feedback? · 05-17-05 1:51am
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