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A fun place created especially for All Black Cases

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Jul 26, 2005 at 9:42am
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A review for AL.

Hello AL,

Good luck in the "Black Case Experience Cafè"competition.

This piece is superb. I love the thoughts and your ability to express them. Your descriptions are excellent.They invite the reader to share your perspective; and are exemplified by your word choices-I personally like how you have incorporated two varying descriptions for your heart; you convey successfully, the real reason for this organs function, but also, added your own personal interpretation for its existence.

Your title is very creative, it adds to the overall precedence of the piece.


Well done
Take care
Tracy


Sorry, I still can't make my mind up!
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A review for AL. · 07-26-05 9:42am
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Re: A review for AL. · 07-26-05 9:56am
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