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Aug 9, 2006 at 5:21pm
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Is this a horrible sentence?
by Lorien Author IconMail Icon
I know I made up the verb, but it fits in the tone of the story (a YA lit book about a high school girl). So tell me, and be brutal: is this a horrible sentence?

She scholarshipped her way to Yale.

Lorien

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LORIEN,

This Merit Badge is just a reminder that you are a wonderfully courageous, dedicated and strong person, and that you mean so much to so many people. 

Oh, and did I mention that you're a fabulous writer? *^*Laugh*^* I can only wish that I had half of your writing talent (and ability to write stories over 2,000 words ...)

Keep that chin up, and keep at it! 

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Is this a horrible sentence? · 08-09-06 5:21pm
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Re: Is this a horrible sentence? · 08-09-06 5:28pm
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Re: Is this a horrible sentence? · 08-10-06 1:33am
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