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Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing · #1168103
I'm always glad to give you my opinion. I'll be gentle and mix it with encouragement.
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Oct 23, 2006 at 6:23pm
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Please Review
I've been looking for some feedback on this, and I was wondering if you could take a look at it. It's the second chapter in a book i am writing. You might not understand some of it w/o the first chapter though, so i'll post both. Thanks in advance!

 Chapter 2: A New Dawn Open in new Window. (13+)
Second Chapter in the fantasy book I am writing.
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Chapter 1: A New Dawn Open in new Window. (13+)
Introduces a slave boy as he meets a mysterious stranger...
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Thanks in advance!
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Please Review · 10-23-06 6:23pm
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Re: Please Review · 10-23-06 7:35pm
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Re: Re: Please Review · 10-24-06 12:48am
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