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Nov 26, 2006 at 6:52am
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Re: Review when you get a chance?
This poem scanned well on the page, and read well and fluently.

I loved the imagery and you captured the joy and happiness of changing seasons well. There was nothing in it I would change that could add to the engagement of the reader.

Thank you for sharing
Shani


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